Do You Epilogue?

Romance readers, do you like epilogues? Writers, do you like to write them? How do you choose when to write an epilogue?

I have never written an epilogue, however, I just drafted one for the upcoming reissue of BORROWING ALEX, and I think it will wrap up the story nicely. I also added a new scene to the last chapter. I’m not padding for word count. With digital publishing, there’s no reason to (not that I would regardless). The lovely thing about ebooks is that an author can write her story the length it needs to be, or wants to be, I guess. This is especially freeing if you’re, as I am, updating and editing/revising a book that was originally targeted to the category romance market.

While BORROWING ALEX was originally written for a long-defunct Harlequin romantic comedy line, the line shut down just as I was finishing the book. Another category romance romantic comedy line sprung up in its place, but the new line wanted less zany and quirky and more “heartwarming,” as the editor who rejected my manuscript explained. BORROWING ALEX simply did not fit what this major publisher was looking for anymore.

By this time, I had discovered my former ebook and print-on-demand trade paperback publisher, Amber Quill Press. The second edition of HEAD OVER HEELS (which was initially published by a publisher who wasn’t fond of paying authors due royalties), as well as the first edition of BORROWING ALEX, were published by AQP and I had a great editing experience there. However, I (as well as many other ebook authors) was a bit ahead of my time. Kindles and Nooks and iPads didn’t exist and the mass market paperback was still king. That’s my way of saying that the first edition of BORROWING ALEX “enjoyed” a very small audience. I’m looking forward to reaching a larger audience by self-publishing digital and trade paperback editions through my own Blue Orchard Books.

Ebooks have changed the ways readers read, and, to some extent, they have changed how writers write. We are more in tune with readers than ever before. We no longer have to rely on publishing houses to forward letters and emails. Readers can get in touch with us directly. That’s not to say that whatever a reader says goes. Authors are still the creators of our books. However, as the market changes and readers who might not have read a lot of category romance back when that was the only game in town (for a book of about 50,000 words) discover new-to-them authors, I find it interesting to hear what they have to say, in the form of reviews and social media. Often I’ll follow a link from Twitter or Facebook to a reader’s blog and a light bulb will go on.

Recently, I read the term “Insta-Love” on a blog to describe how rapidly romance heroes and heroines fall in love. Readers who might have never read print category romances at all find Insta-Love a little unbelievable. Neither do they necessarily believe that a book needs every single thread tied up neatly in the last scene. However, for those of us schooled in category romance by the biggest category publisher around, well, wrapping up threads was a very strong guideline. And stopping the story as soon as possible after the hero and heroine committed to each other was another. As was getting in a marriage proposal before the book ended. After all, romances are supposed to end on a positive note, and, in category romance, the marriage proposal is the ideal.

That began to change as the readership evolved even within category romance. However, as I said, I initially wrote and published BORROWING ALEX while these tropes were strongly encouraged. Now, going over the book for reissue, even though no one complained (to me, anyway, or in the form of reviews) that my characters were guilty of getting engaged too quickly, I can see that, all right, maybe, in some books, they can slow things down a bit.

And that’s what I’m doing with BORROWING ALEX. The story takes place in the span of five days, and, yes, the H/h do experience Insta-Love. But does that mean they need to experience Insta-Engagement?

I’m not saying where the engagement now occurs in BORROWING ALEX, although some of you might guess (and, no, I couldn’t bring myself to eliminate the engagement entirely and make Alex a Mr. Right Now, because that’s just not who he is). But once the light bulb blinked, “Hey, Cindy, you are allowed to write additional scenes if they forward the story,” and, “Hey, Dimbulb, guess what? An ebook can be longer than 45,000 words computer count and the editor won’t strangle you,” well, it’s opened up a whole new world for me as a writer. To continue to learn and grow and develop as a writer… That’s a good thing and something each of us should continually strive for.

P.S. If you want to “read” the original edition of BORROWING ALEX, it is and will continue to be available as an audio book.

P.P.S. If you want to be among the first to know when the second edition of BORROWING ALEX releases from Blue Orchard Books, sign up for my Newsletter.

Tuesday Deals: Free and 99 Cent EBooks!

Time for more sweet Tuesday Deals! Please remember to double-check the prices before buying or downloading.

sower_hollandFirst up is Debra Holland, who I had the pleasure of meeting in an airport following the NINC conference last year. Debra’s Fantasy Romance, SOWER OF DREAMS, regularly priced at $3.99 is now on sale for .99 at Amazon for a limited time.

Book One in the Gods’ Dream Trilogy

A Fantasy Romance Endorsed by Andre Norton, The Grand Dame of Science Fiction and Fantasy. “Desert and sea both provide vivid backgrounds for action and real emotion in Sower of Dreams—outstanding and well-presented fantasy, which will keep the book in one’s hands, eyes on the page—GOOD READ.”

Overview of Sower of Dreams: A kingdom invaded. A warrior princess on the run for her life. A hero from another world. An evil god who wants their souls. Can they join forces to defeat the evil one and win freedom for their people?

.99 at Amazon!

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McLinn---A-Stranger-in-the-Patricia McLinn’s A STRANGER IN THE FAMILY, Book 1 in the Bardville, Wyoming trilogy and regularly priced at $3.99 is FREE at Amazon until July 28th.

A sexy, intriguing stranger arrives unexpectedly at her Wyoming ranch, threatening the one thing Cambria protects more fiercely than her heart – her family. Bodie’s discovery that he fathered a son 17 years ago starts a search that leads him to the warm and welcoming Weston family. But his response to one member of the family is far more than he ever expected. The sparks between him and Cambria are real … and so is the danger to his hopes for their future if she finds out why he’s really in Wyoming.

“. . . It’s one of those books that when you finish, you think, “I’m definitely going to read that again and everything else this author has ever written!” – Live, Love, Write

FREE at Amazon!

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Lastly, I have been trying to feature an author for two weeks in a row, an author who signed up for the promotion with my understanding that their book would be on sale when I posted it. Last week the book wasn’t on sale, so I took it down. Apparently, there was a misunderstanding and we decided to try again this week. Well, the book still isn’t on sale, so I am removing it from my posting again.

Readers, it is not my intention to mislead you with books that are not free or on sale for .99 cents on the day they should be. I have no control over whether an author’s marketing plans go into effect or not, but when something like this happens two weeks in a row, my only decision can to be to remove the listing permanently and not feature it again. This is why I say to make sure to check the listing yourself before you buy or download.

Next week, I have four listings for you!

I have double-checked the prices for Debra Holland’s .99 book and Patricia McLinn’s free book this morning, and they are both where they should be. So go forth and enjoy these talented authors!

My Canada

They say a picture is worth 1000 words. In this case, they’re worth about 10 million. I love Canada!

After a very wet June, we are off to a great start for July. With a bit of cheating. These photos were taken June 30th. :) Isn't that a million dollar view?
After a very wet June, we are off to a great start for July. With a bit of cheating. These photos were taken June 30th. 🙂 Isn’t that a million dollar view?
Allie swimming! Way over her head. Way to go, 11-year-old doggie.
Allie swimming! Way over her head. Way to go, 11-year-old doggie.
Go Jump In The Lake.
Go Jump In The Lake. Well, maybe not from here. It’s kind of far down.

A very wet, very contented beagle.

A very wet, very contented beagle.

The Maple Leaf Forever!

Happy Canada Day!

While I Was Sleeping–Number 13 in Romantic Comedy!

I am loving the promotion for HEAD OVER HEELS via Ereader News Today! Yesterday, my little book hit #29 in Kindle Paid Romantic Comedy Bestsellers! I think the Romantic Comedy category is fairly new for Amazon, but I’m not sure. I can’t remember seeing it when I was scouring the lists during the rise of WHERE SHE BELONGS back in early February. But then WSB isn’t a romcom.

I didn’t think HEAD OVER HEELS could climb any higher. This was my first time with an ENT promotion, and other experiments with advertising this spring haven’t proven anywhere near as effective. But ENT rocks! Finally, the “little book that could”, as I like to call it, is gaining some traction, temporary though it might be.

Then I woke up this morning to discover that HEAD OVER HEELS is 841 in the Kindle Paid store overall—a far way from the top 100, but I never expected to crack the top 1000 with this promotion, so I am thrilled! Not only but, but HEAD OVER HEELS is #13 right now in Romantic Comedy, #93 in Women’s Fiction, and #98 in Contemporary Women. Cracking the top 100 in Contemporary Romance is my next obvious goal, but if the book doesn’t make it, I am totally stoked that it’s done as well as it has! Number 13 in Romantic Comedy—whoot!

Here’s the screen shot:

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Look at me sharing shelf space with Stephanie Bond!

If you’re interested in buying a copy at the limited time sale price of 99 cents –> click here.

Head Over Heels 99 Cents at Amazon for a Limited Time!

HEAD OVER HEELS just dropped to .99 at Amazon! That’s a savings of two bucks, folks. Imagine what you could do with that other two bucks—like check out my short stories, buy some thread, half a coffee, an entire chocolate bar, or a pack of gum!

HEAD OVER HEELS will remain for sale at .99  until midnight, June 29th.

In other words, get it while you can!

Amazon

Canadian Amazon

UK Amazon

If you’re in Europe, check out the Amazon store for your country. Here’s an easy cut and paste for the search bar: Cindy Procter-King Head Over Heels.

If you’re typing in the name without cutting and pasting, remember to spell Procter with an E. I’m on a mission. World domination of Procter spelled with an E!